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石继忠 男,1989年参加工作,中学高级教师、济宁市骨干教师、市级教学能手；在工作中,立足实际,认真搞好教学,创造性地开展学校的教育教学、教改科研工作,在教育这片田园里勤奋耕耘,积极探索,不断改进教学手段,吸收先进的教育理念,在多年的英语教学工作中,积累了丰富的教学经验,形成了自己独特的教学方法；从教以来一直担任初中毕业班的教学工作,在历年的中考中,所执教的班级都取得了优异的成绩,受到学校和社会各界的一致好评；曾先后在省级、国家级报刊发表论文一百多篇,现担任《英语周报》《英语辅导报》《学生英语报》《英语画刊》《英语园地》等多家报刊的特约编辑.
It’s October 1st today, the National Day. I wanted to go out with my parents. Unfortunately, they were going to see some pieces of furniture. So I have to stay at home. In the① fact, I was now the real master of my house. I could do whatever I wanted to do. It’s so wonderful. I opened the icebox and took out some delicious food. I had such a good appetite today than ever before. I began to eat as many② as possible. Then I turned on the TV and watched the basketball match. It was an exciting match and I was interested in it. After that I called Li Hua at 7221047 and said “Hello, dear friend. Shall we go and play football today?” He answered, “OK, I just want to invite you to play it, too. Let’s go together.” We enjoyed ourselves for two hours in the open air.
After getting to③ home, I took a bath and hummed a classical song at the same time. Then I went to the kitchen and did the cooking for my family. My parents enjoyed the lunch very much and were very pleased with me.
I felt a little tired and went to bed. I fell asleep very soon and had a wonderful dream. In the dream, I could not helping saying, “How④ a wonderful day it is！”
1. 優点：
这是记叙生活中的一天的记叙文.整篇文章首尾呼应.文章清楚地记叙了国庆节这天的活动,围绕着一个中心“A Wonderful Day”展开.
2. 需要修改的地方：
①去掉the.in fact意为“事实上”.
②many改为much.as much as possible意为“尽可能多地”.
③去掉to.get home意为“到家”.
④how改为what.引导感叹句,后接名词时用what.
3. 评分：
按中考英语作文满分15分的评分标准,本文修改前可得13分.
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